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    Thread: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine?


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    11-17-2011, 12:12 AM
    I like your work godwide_void. Thank you for asking our feedback.
    My feeling? I see it as a background music working well with a video about landscape, caves, the natural world and wildlife. Listening to it, I see aspects of rain and drops, springs and rocks in caves, air and vast windy tundra sort of landscapes with horses running through the vast plains under an open sky.

    Regarding the tittle, my Latin is far away however, if I remember correctly, the term "sator" carries the connotation of "Lord" and "immensus" means "immense" and "vast" rather than "infinite". As it is, "Sator Unus Immensus" means something like "Lord, the Immense One" ... it is a good tittle, I like it. Smile but if you are aiming at saying literally "The One Infinite Creator", you should be closer with the terms: "Unus Creator Infinitus".

    Thank you for your artistic co-creation. Wink

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    Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 12:57 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Namaste - 11-16-2011, 08:11 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 08:44 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Namaste - 11-16-2011, 09:22 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 10:12 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Namaste - 11-16-2011, 10:36 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 11:18 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Meerie - 11-16-2011, 12:25 PM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 12:36 PM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Daydreamin - 11-16-2011, 01:08 PM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-16-2011, 06:49 PM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Whitefeather - 11-17-2011, 12:12 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by godwide_void - 11-17-2011, 03:50 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by 3DMonkey - 11-17-2011, 12:17 AM
    RE: Could I please get some feedback on a new song of mine? - by Whitefeather - 11-17-2011, 12:38 AM

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