Beautiful Prayer Share

[zenmaster]

I had a look around to see if I could find who did this originally did this translation to sort of, verify it's accuracy, to no avail.

It's a "poetic rendition" by Mark Hathaway, based on the work of Neil Douglas-Klotz: http://www.co-intelligence.org/lordsprayer2.html

Douglas-Klotz rendition goes like this:

O Birther! Father- Mother of the Cosmos

Focus your light within us - make it useful.

Create your reign of unity now-

through our fiery hearts and willing hands

Help us love beyond our ideals

and sprout acts of compassion for all creatures.

Animate the earth within us: we then

feel the Wisdom underneath supporting all.

Untangle the knots within

so that we can mend our hearts' simple ties to each other.

Don't let surface things delude us,

But free us from what holds us back from our true purpose.

Out of you, the astonishing fire,

Returning light and sound to the cosmos.

Amen.

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Some informed commentary on it: http://aramaicdesigns.blogspot.com/2007/...osmos.html