12-22-2009, 01:07 PM
Greetings Corey.
We are very much in a process of tuning in on this. I (like you) am learning these things. Your writing here resonates with my being. I myself have discovered some of the same metaphors you use, such as "evil" is just "live" spelled backwards. Very simple, but you creatively extend the concept. You are including linguistics in your language as well.
This adds another dimension to language and shows that the words we speak are much more than initially meet the eye. Each word, each symbol has a historical frequency or rather set of frequencies. And these symbols themselves operate on a subconscious level that an appropriate languaging system can access. So, you and I are experimenting to find what communicates most successfully. We are accessing the Universal Information Field and at this point it is quite rough---like learning to hit the bullseye with a sling-shot. I have to say that indeed you do that many times in this piece. But, it is just a first draft.
Love is communicable ease and finding the best way to share these Universal downsteps requires a new languaging system that is interdimensional rather than linear.
This, of course, is not the New York Times. Instead of who-what-where-when-how, you are attempting to tune into the implicate "why." This, in my limited understanding, is what a focused channel from the Universal Information Field is all about. It goes well beyond the words written on a page. It evolkes the reader to also channel the same coordinates and thus grok much more than is written down.
That's why the pen is indeed far mightier than any sword. Although the sword cuts two ways it cannot inspire and bring the joy of an "AHA," only judge (rather harshly) and kill. It is only one dimensional. Now I am speaking about myself. Sometimes in my earlier writing I have telegraphed my own angst and wanted to grab the reader by the collar and shake them vigorously while demanding, "WAKE UP!" This proves that I am the one sleeping. While your writing here does not do that to any great extent, I can sense a bit of that right beneath the surface.
Now, the mechanics, such as grammar and spelling are easy to correct later.
I have given my heartfelt kudos for your writing here. Now, here is how I think your communication skills (mine too) can be improved.
Simply this: Prepare yourself. Find your bliss. Then sit in front of a blank page. Meditate, pray or whatever you do to be at peace and start typing. Do not edit. Do not censor. Don't worry about spellling or grammar. And, don't stop and reread what you've written. Just flow. Whatever comes out. Try to communiate in 20 minutes the concepts you have in this piece. Do it by memory of what you want this piece to convey. That is, your intention. The outline is in your head but just let the details emerge from your subconscious and flow through your fingers without analysis. See what happenes. You will probably be surprised.
namaste,
Rob
We are very much in a process of tuning in on this. I (like you) am learning these things. Your writing here resonates with my being. I myself have discovered some of the same metaphors you use, such as "evil" is just "live" spelled backwards. Very simple, but you creatively extend the concept. You are including linguistics in your language as well.
This adds another dimension to language and shows that the words we speak are much more than initially meet the eye. Each word, each symbol has a historical frequency or rather set of frequencies. And these symbols themselves operate on a subconscious level that an appropriate languaging system can access. So, you and I are experimenting to find what communicates most successfully. We are accessing the Universal Information Field and at this point it is quite rough---like learning to hit the bullseye with a sling-shot. I have to say that indeed you do that many times in this piece. But, it is just a first draft.
Love is communicable ease and finding the best way to share these Universal downsteps requires a new languaging system that is interdimensional rather than linear.
This, of course, is not the New York Times. Instead of who-what-where-when-how, you are attempting to tune into the implicate "why." This, in my limited understanding, is what a focused channel from the Universal Information Field is all about. It goes well beyond the words written on a page. It evolkes the reader to also channel the same coordinates and thus grok much more than is written down.
That's why the pen is indeed far mightier than any sword. Although the sword cuts two ways it cannot inspire and bring the joy of an "AHA," only judge (rather harshly) and kill. It is only one dimensional. Now I am speaking about myself. Sometimes in my earlier writing I have telegraphed my own angst and wanted to grab the reader by the collar and shake them vigorously while demanding, "WAKE UP!" This proves that I am the one sleeping. While your writing here does not do that to any great extent, I can sense a bit of that right beneath the surface.
Now, the mechanics, such as grammar and spelling are easy to correct later.
I have given my heartfelt kudos for your writing here. Now, here is how I think your communication skills (mine too) can be improved.
Simply this: Prepare yourself. Find your bliss. Then sit in front of a blank page. Meditate, pray or whatever you do to be at peace and start typing. Do not edit. Do not censor. Don't worry about spellling or grammar. And, don't stop and reread what you've written. Just flow. Whatever comes out. Try to communiate in 20 minutes the concepts you have in this piece. Do it by memory of what you want this piece to convey. That is, your intention. The outline is in your head but just let the details emerge from your subconscious and flow through your fingers without analysis. See what happenes. You will probably be surprised.
namaste,
Rob