Inspired word weaving
04-17-2016, 03:26 PM, (This post was last modified: 07-25-2017, 03:59 AM by Raz.)
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04-18-2016, 05:41 PM, (This post was last modified: 07-25-2017, 03:59 AM by Raz.)
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04-19-2016, 01:33 PM,
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This is beautifully inspiring!!! Smile
(((( as beyond ... so within ))))
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04-30-2016, 07:38 AM, (This post was last modified: 07-25-2017, 03:59 AM by Raz.)
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04-30-2016, 11:27 PM, (This post was last modified: 04-30-2016, 11:29 PM by I am Shayne.)
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Very thought grasping word weavitures you have written. I love reading high-level works like those.

I posted this into the poetry thread, but I wanted to expose it a bit more:

My world is conceived through what I believe.
My own creation I perceive.
I decide what I achieve.
I design the dreams to weave.
It slips my mind more often than not,
this world is created by my thought.
Some times are dim and some are bright.
Black seems dark compared to white.
But all black is, is a lack of light.
Every day has its night.
The lowest low can be the greatest height,
yet what I believe is always right.
This is my personal universe.

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05-02-2016, 07:45 AM, (This post was last modified: 07-25-2017, 03:59 AM by Raz.)
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05-02-2016, 10:43 AM,
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I like the subjects of your poems and the creative word choice. So cool to have a community of Law of One type thinkers, especially in the poetry category. I just love that we have other selves available to communicate within a similar distortion.
Repost 'my' works as you please. Thank you for wishing to spread the word.

Here's another poem I wrote when I was a senior in high school. It's more 'advanced' than my level of thinking at the time.

EVERYTHING IS imPOSSIBLE

In reality a child is more powerful than the average man.
his young mind creates iLlusions carrying a boundless span.
man is trapped by his own imagination of self-defeat.
he knows not the concept of thoughts discrete.
if the body is separate from the mind,
impossibiLities will occur.
fact and fiction will be difficUlt to differ.
a fine line lies between the two.
it all dependS on your point of view.
if pessimism Is your way of creed,
congratulations you will never succeed.
positive thought and self-belief,
an open mind and nothing beneath;
bare necessities tO keep life secure.
merge the qualities to fiNd your cure.
the sickness of the individual man
will be healed when the spiritual sun riseS to reveal
the illusionary reality.

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05-08-2016, 01:43 PM, (This post was last modified: 07-25-2017, 03:58 AM by Raz.)
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05-21-2016, 12:21 AM,
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I seek nothing
I am asleep

I seek to know
I am awakening

I know nothing
I am dreaming

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05-21-2016, 12:22 AM,
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My being is energy exchanged through the elements.
I belong in this process of infinite elegance.
I am but a drop of water in the ebb and flow.
The process engulfs me even more than I know.

The sun emanates far in the distance.
Is it love, or a byproduct of its existence?

I inhale the air and return it my breath.
Wind blows through the trees, my sigh is the breeze.
The elements grant me life till I grant them my death.
My body shall be dirt to feed the trees,
Which open their flowers to feed the bees,
To then grow fruits which drop the seeds,
To sprout into elements that everything needs.
All things are connected and interdependent.
All I am now, will serve as a remnant.

The sun emanates far in the distance.
Is it love, or a byproduct of its existence?

Sunlight moves the air around the world.
Sunlight lifts the ocean into the sky.
The sun gives energy to the process of Earth.
Life exists here, and the sun is the reason why.

What could Earth do in return?

The sun emanates far in the distance.
Is it love, or a byproduct of its existence?

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05-21-2016, 11:12 PM,
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What does it take to be a star?
A blue one.
Many billions of years of evolution.

There is an anthro somewhere who needs me and I need them.
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04-17-2017, 05:54 PM,
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I wrote this one about a year ago, after I chased and helped detain a person who did something very bad to a woman at the gas station next to where I work. After the experience, I realized that my fitness is more than just for having fun and showing egotistical abilities, but it can be used for great service to those in need, and that it is well to be ready for anything at any moment. I was inspired to write this:


I believe the experience of life is priceless,
and its preservation to be righteous.
To be so, in all of such likeness,
I wish to be of service in any crisis.
I have the stopping power to protect who is innocent,
and the intelligence to detect what is imminent.
I have the endurance to outrun any criminal.
I will reduce they who are cynical,
yet, I will show goodness to brighten their dark mind.
I will show love to those who, to it, are blind.
I shall do my best, although the journey may never be done.
I will to help the world reflect the light of the Sun.

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