05-06-2019, 04:49 AM
(05-06-2019, 04:45 AM)IndigoGeminiWolf Wrote: That was great. I can tell you're definitely a wanderer.
I would have said, "A new race will arise". Do you think that arise might sound better than rise?
I too feel like I don't belong here. I am not a part of these people.
Thanks Gem!
You're quite right, that flows better so I've changed it.
L & L
Jim