Personal Experience of "Mind Control"

[Coordinate_Apotheosis]

Even if it isn't by Ra, the experience itself is quite interesting to be heard.  Both in it's, surprising manner of content, and it's interesting and fascinating plot.

But, I must agree, for the purposes of constructive criticism, and I too don't intend to come off sounding rude...  I find the manner of Ra's dialogue to be very, well.

Let me put it this way.  Could you try to emulate the manner of speaking made in the Ra Material in the of voice of Ra that you have speaking here?  As it is now, it makes it very hard to suspend disbelief.

Again, I don't mean to sound rude, I want to believe...  I hope this helps you in someway..