04-25-2017, 02:51 PM
(04-25-2017, 12:35 PM)Coordinate_Apotheosis Wrote: You should add references and a bit more research from other sources if you don't want most people to immediately write this off as a spiritual remake of The X Files plot.
Black goo, aliens, nanotechnology and extraterrestrial human creators... the evil global spanning shadow government.
With more additional information, some references, and much more explanation behind these things you'll have something more solid than already had.
Just realize some parts read closer like fiction than anything else due to my inferred suspension of disbelief by lack of any real explanation about things like the black crystalline leyline earth grid that I mistook to be the evil nanotech black goo...
Or the parts about demons and AI.
Its hard to believe even when you want to believe.
The problem is that such references don't exist. It's the nature of this kind of information that the people providing it can't provide references because of the danger involved. They are whistleblowers in the truest sense of the word. It's the job of the reader/listener to use their discernment (aka BS detector) to determine whether it is true or false.
Of course, I could provide a bazillion references that 9/11 was caused solely by 19 terrorists and Osama bin Laden armed with box cutters financed by Iraq. Would that make you believe it?
